Help with text for mercurial.selenic.com
Arne Babenhauserheide
arne_bab at web.de
Thu Dec 8 20:37:55 UTC 2011
Am Mittwoch, 7. Dezember 2011, 14:28:41 schrieb Tom Anderson:
> When in doubt, reach for the passive voice:
>
> A multitude of workflows are supported, and functionality is
> easily enhanced with extensions.
>
> A bit more freestyle:
>
> A multitude of workflows are possible, and extensions allow easy
> enhancement of functionality .
I think this sounds a bit forced, which makes it too weak.
And in PR (that’s what a website is), passive voice is not that effective.
But thank you for your input anyway!
Best wishes,
Arne
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